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The elegiac couplet

The elegiac couplet: a hexameter followed by the shorter line traditionally called a pentameter.

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The scheme of the couplet

Strictly speaking the elegiac couplet is a strophic, not a stichic metre. A stichic metre repeats the same line over and over, as the epic hexameter does; a strophic one repeats a stanza of several lines. The couplet is a two-line stanza, repeated as often as the poet wishes. Its small compass and wide use in extended compositions make it convenient to treat with the stichic metres, as West does.[1] It is, in effect, a short strophe.[2] In West’s classification of Ionian epodic verse it is the form hexameter ‖ D ¦ D |||.[3] In that formula D stands for the hemiepes, — ⏔ — ⏔ —, where ⏔ is a biceps, a position of two shorts or one long; ¦ marks a caesura, ‖ the end of a period and ||| the end of the stanza.

The two lines

line scheme notes
hexameter — ⏔ — ⏔ — ¦ ⏑ ¦ ⏑ — ¦ ⏔ — ⏔ — × ‖ as in epic, but with less prosodic licence[4]
“pentameter” — ⏔ — ⏔ — ¦ — ⏑ ⏑ — ⏑ ⏑ — ||| two hemiepes cola, D ¦ D, always divided by a caesura; contraction of the bicipitia only in the first colon[5]

Here is a whole couplet by Anyte, the hexameter set out in its six feet and the “pentameter” in its two halves:

1 ἵζευ ἅπας ὑπὸ καλὰ δάφνας εὐθαλέα φύλλα

foot 1ἵ—hiζευ⏑zeuἅ⏑ha2πας—pāsὑ⏑hyπὸ⏑po3κα—kāλὰ⏑laδά⏑da4φνας—phnāsεὐ—eu5θα—thāλέ⏑leα⏑a6φύλ—phylλα×la

2 ὡραίου τ’ ἄρυσαι νάματος ἁδὺ πόμα

hemiepes — ⏔ — ⏔ —ὡ—hōραί—raiου—ouτ’ἄ⏑t’aρυ⏑ryσαι—saihemiepes — ⏑ ⏑ — ⏑ ⏑ —νά—nāμα⏑maτο⏑toς ἁ—shāδὺ⏑dyπό⏑poμα×ma

Sit, everyone, beneath the laurel’s lovely, thriving leaves, and from the seasonable stream take a sweet drink.

Anyte, Greek Anthology 9.313.1–2. Line 1, the hexameter, in six feet, with the caesura (dashed bar) after καλὰ (kala). Line 2, the “pentameter”, in two hemiepes with the caesura between them. Red: ζευ (zeu), a diphthong shortened before the vowel of ἅπας (hapas).

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The second line is traditionally called the pentameter. West keeps the name in inverted commas, since the line is really two hemiepes cola.[4] Each colon is two and a half feet long (Hephaestion’s “penthemimer”, πενθημιμερές, penthēmimeres: five half-feet). So the name is traditional but misleading.[6]

the “pentameter”first hemiepessecond hemiepescaesurafootfoot½footfoot½2½ feet2½ feet2½ + 2½ = 5 feet: “penta-meter”
Each hemiepes is two feet and a half (red), so the two together make five feet. The line is not built of five whole feet, which is why the name misleads. ⏔: a biceps, two shorts or one long.

Hephaestion describes the line in just those terms. In our translation of his Greek: “Take the dactylic penthemimer twice and the ἐλεγεῖον is the result. Its second part is always seven syllables, two dactyls and a syllable; in the first, the two feet can change, so that they are both dactyls or both spondees, or the first a dactyl and the second a spondee, or the other way round”.[7] The result is a line of fourteen, thirteen or twelve syllables. Hephaestion lists the four shapes, with a Callimachean example of each:[8]

syllables first colon example[9]
14 — ⏑ ⏑ — ⏑ ⏑ — παίσατε, τῶν δ’ ἐτέων ἡ δεκὰς οὐκ ὀλίγη
13 — ⏑ ⏑ — — — Νήϊδες οἳ Μούσης οὐκ ἐγένοντο φίλοι
13 — — — ⏑ ⏑ — ῥέζειν, καὶ στεφέων εὔαδε τῷ Παρίῳ
12 — — — — — τίκτεσθαι· βροντᾶν δ’ οὐκ ἐμόν, ἀλλὰ Διός

Note that only the second colon, doubled, would make an ἐλεγεῖον (elegeion, Hephaestion’s name for the “pentameter”). The first cannot, unless it happens to consist of two dactyls.[10] Hephaestion adds the rule of the caesura in the strongest terms. The ἐλεγεῖον must in every case be cut at one or other of the penthemimers. Otherwise it is faulty, πεπλημμελημένον (peplēmmelēmenon). He cites a line of Callimachus, ἱερά, νῦν δὲ Διοσκουρίδεω γενεή, in which Διοσκουρίδεω runs across the division.[11] West and Hephaestion thus agree on the structure, D ¦ D, and on the invariable caesura. Only the names differ.

The endings

The hexameter of the couplet ends — × like any hexameter. The pentameter ends on the single long of the second hemiepes. Since that is period-end, the position may be filled by a short syllable, called a brevis in longo, “a short in a long”.[12] Elision, the loss of a short final vowel before a word beginning with a vowel,[13] is admitted at the caesura, as in the hexameter. The sense need not pause at the end of a couplet, but it usually does.[4] The first couplet of Theognis’ seal shows most of this:[4]

19 Κύρνε, σοφιζομένωι μὲν ἐμοὶ σφρηγὶς ἐπικείσθω

foot 1Κύρ—kyrνε⏑neσο⏑so2φι—phiζο⏑zoμέ⏑me3νωι—nōiμὲ⏑meν ἐ⏑ne4μοὶ—moiσφρη—sphrē5γὶς—gīsἐ⏑eπι⏑pi6κείσ—keisθω×thō

20 τοῖσδ’ ἔπεσιν· λήσει δ’ οὔποτε κλεπτόμενα

hemiepes — ⏔ — ⏔ —τοῖσ—toisδ’ ἔ⏑d’ eπε⏑peσιν—sinλή—lēσει—seihemiepes — ⏑ ⏑ — ⏑ ⏑ —δ’ οὔ—d’ ouπο⏑poτε⏑teκλεπ—klepτό⏑toμε⏑meνα×na

Cyrnus, let a seal be set by me, as I practise my art, on these verses; they will never be stolen unnoticed.

Theognis 19–20: Greek from Bergk 1882 II p. 119. Dashed bars: the caesuras. Red, in 19: the final position, × (here -θω, -thō). Red, in 20: λή- (lē-), a contracted biceps, allowed only in the first half; δ’ (d’), δέ (de) elided at the caesura; -να (-na), a short syllable in the final long position, the brevis in longo.

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In line 20 the elision of δέ falls at the caesura, and the last position is occupied by the short syllable -να.[4]

Where the hemiepes comes from

The colon — ⏑ ⏑ — ⏑ ⏑ — is not peculiar to the couplet. In Archilochus’ epodes it stands as a separate period after a hexameter or an iambic trimeter. There it admits no contraction and no hiatus, but does admit correption in the first biceps.[14] Hiatus is the meeting of two vowels across word-end with both kept at face value.[15] Correption is the shortening of a final long vowel or diphthong before a word that begins with a vowel, as ζευ (zeu) before ἅπας (hapas) in Anyte’s couplet.[16] The hemiepes also opens the Iliad, μῆνιν ἄειδε θεά (mēnin aeide thea), which D’Angour uses to introduce it. The pentameter is therefore the pairing of two of these familiar cola. The first is allowed the contractions of the hexameter, and the second is kept pure.[4] Euripides’ one elegiac lament shows the same pattern. Its second lines can be set out as D : D, contracted (if at all) only in the first half.[17]

feature hexameter of the couplet pentameter
contraction as in the epic hexameter, where the fifth biceps is the one least often contracted (about once in 20 lines in Homer)[18] first colon only[4]
caesura third foot, as in epic invariably between the cola
end — × ‖ — (brevis in longo allowed) |||
prosodic licences princeps freedoms as in epic, but more seldom exercised than in stichic hexameters the same; hiatus at the caesura particularly rare[4]

Notes

  1. ^ West 1987, p. 23.
  2. ^ Bartol 2022, p. 221.
  3. ^ West 1987, p. 31.
  4. ^ a b c d e f g h West 1987, p. 24.
  5. ^ West 1987, p. 24; Battezzato 2009, p. 138.
  6. ^ Bartol 2022, p. 221 n. 1.
  7. ^ Hephaestion, Ench. 15.14; cf. Bartol 2022, p. 221 n. 1, on the two and a half dactyls of each half.
  8. ^ Hephaestion, Ench. 15.14–15.
  9. ^ Callimachus, ap. Heph. 15.15.
  10. ^ Hephaestion, Ench. 15.14.
  11. ^ Hephaestion, Ench. 15.15.
  12. ^ West 1987, pp. 4, 24.
  13. ^ West 1987, p. 13.
  14. ^ West 1987, pp. 31–32.
  15. ^ West 1987, p. 15.
  16. ^ West 1987, p. 14.
  17. ^ Lourenço 2011, p. 69, on Andromache 103–16.
  18. ^ West 1987, pp. 20, 24.
Picture credits on this page
  1. Behind the title: Symposium: tondo of an Attic red-figure kylix by the Brygos Painter, from Vulci. Vatican, Museo Gregoriano Etrusco 16582. Brygos Painter; photo: Mark Landon · CC BY 4.0 · via Wikimedia Commons
  2. Hoplites go into battle to the music of the auloi: detail of the Chigi vase, 7th century BC. Chigi Painter · Public domain · via Wikimedia Commons
  3. Callimachus, Coma Berenices: papyrus fragment, 1st century BC. Florence, Biblioteca Medicea Laurenziana, PSI 1092. Biblioteca Medicea Laurenziana papyrus (reproduction) · Public domain · via Wikimedia Commons
  4. A papyrus of the second century AD with Callimachus’ Aetia (fr. 178): P.Oxy. XI 1362. The Egypt Exploration Society (B. P. Grenfell and A. S. Hunt) · Public domain · via Wikimedia Commons